Mock up 1 for double page spread

This was the first idea that I had for the double page spread of my radio play. Ideally this would go into a magazine advertisig it for next year if I was producing it.

Prezi tutorial

 This was the first time I had used Prezzi, so I looked on YouTube and found this tutorial. By the end of the tutorial, I found that it had helped and now I felt confident about using it. It gave me tips on how to use the different aspects of Prezzi, making the steps simple and easy to follow.

Orignal ideas for cast: cast profiles

Character profiles:

Simon: The Murderer

Hair:  black

Eye colour: green

Other recognisable features on the face: scar across the right cheek from a knife fight when he was younger.

Age: 24 years old

Ethnicity: White British male

Height: 6 foot 2 inches

Wanted for: Murder of 20 members of his family

Detective:

Hair: blonde

Eye colour: Brown

Age: 39 years old

Ethnicity: White Asian Male

Height: 5 foot 11 inches

Simon’s mum

Hair: Brown/ grey

Eye colour: Green

Age: 53 years old

Recognisable features: wears glasses and has a scar on her forehead from where she fell off her bike when she was younger

Ethnicity: white British female

Height: 5 foot 5 inches

Judge:

Hair: ginger

Eye colour: Hazel

Age: 49

Ethnicity:  Black African Male

Height: 5 foot 11 inches

 Simon’s lawyer

Hair: red

Eye colour: green

Age: 30 years old

Ethnicity: white British male

Height: 5 foot 8 inches

An unknown family member

Hair: black

Eye colour: brown

Age: 20’s

Ethnicity: white British female

Height: 5 foot 4 inches

Simons cousin

Hair: brown

Eye colour: green

Age: late 20’s

Ethnicity: White British male

Height: 6 foot 3 inches

Photos of cast members

This is one of my members of my cast Sammy Ali she helped me to voice the character in my script of the unknown family member who came in at the end of the radio play script. 

This is a picture of Joshua Smith he was another person who had a part in my radio play he played the part of one of the inner voices of the killer's dead cousin.

This is a picture of myself I wrote the play and voiced the character of the Judge.

 

This is another member of the cast Adrainna Paniak she helped me to voice the character of the lawyer for my radio play.

 

 

 

 

 

Final script

    OUT TO GET ALL

TIME FOR JUSTICE

JUSTICE IS NIGH

SCENE: 1

       (POLICE STATION)

SOUND: Radio fading into the background

DETECTIVE:  This interview begins at thirteen hundred hours.
 Mr Simon Andrew Ross you are charged with the murder of twenty family members. How do you plead?

SIMON: I plead not guilty. (A wavering voice that doesn't convince the Detective)

DETECTIVE:   I am about to show the evidence Item number 1 - a piece of clothing we found at the crime scene, where we found the bodies of his cousin and mother at one of the first scenes we attended.

INNER VOICE:   The sound of Simon's mum cut through: “You are guilty and that's all you need to know. Justice is nigh!”

SIMON:  (His face visibly pales) I do not recognise these pieces of clothing! I have never seen them before.

INNER VOICE: Simon's cousin voice accuses Simon. “You have seen this before remember, and we’ll get the justice we deserve.
You are a killer Simon! Justice is nigh!”

LAWYER:  Detective I would like to call for a break in the interview as my clients isn’t looking too well.

DETECTIVE: (speaks to the tape) A break in the interview noted at thirteen thirty hours.

INNER VOICE: Simon's Mum's voice: “Simon tell the truth it's the only way!
No one can live with that sort of guilt.  Justice is nigh!”

SOUND: Door closes as the click of a tape recorder being restarted is heard

Inner voice: Simon’s mums voice: ‘’You will be found out better to tell them now than when it’s too late. Justice will be given to us. You chose the wrong path, and now you can never return to the right path. You are an outcast to the family, and in the eyes of God. Justice is nigh.

DETECTIVE: The interview begins again at fifteen hundred hours.
 (A slight pause before continuing)
 I am showing Mr Simon Ross item number 2. For the benefit of the tape recording I am showing Mr Ross a knife that was found at the scene of the crime. The knife has been identified as the murder weapon with both your Mum's and Dad's blood on it. How do you explain this? (before Simon can answer his Dad's voice pops into his head again)

SOUND: Wind whistling

 INNER VOICE:  Simon’s cousin voice:   Simon you have seen this before, REMEMBER. GET US THE JUSTICE WE DESERVE! You are nothing but a killer justice is nigh!

DETECTIVE:   Simon do you recognize this knife?

SIMON:  I have only seen this particular knife when my mum has been preparing food for cooking in the kitchen.

DETECTIVE: (sighs heavily as not getting anywhere) We found your fingerprints all over the kitchen. HOW DO YOU EXPLAIN THAT?

LAWYER:   At this time I have advised my client to exercise his right to reply with ‘No Comment.’

INNER VOICE:   Simon’s cousinvoice:  Simon don’t let our deaths be in vain!  TELL THE TRUTH!  You know exactly why your finger prints are around the kitchen.  Justice is nigh!

DETECTIVE: I am about to show MR Ross item number 3 that we discovered at the second crime scene. For the purpose of the tape recorder I am showing Mr Ross a piece of cloth that we identified belonging to the deceased man – his cousin.

SOUND:  Rustling of papers as he pulls a bag from a pile of evidence next to him.

DETECTIVE: The item that I am exhibiting is a piece of cloth covered in blood. After it had been sent for forensic examination the lab scientists concluded that it belonged to the clothing from a dead body found in the garden. The finger prints found upon it belong to Mr Simon Ross.

INNER VOICE: Cousinvoice:” Let me have the justice that I deserve!
Let all of us including your cousin have justice!
Justice is nigh!!”

SIMON: My cousin’s dead!!(voice wavering) I didn't know! Why was I not informed of this before?

INNER VOICE: Simon’s cousin: ‘Don’t lie Simon, you don’t deserve to walk away from this horror. You murdered us all and you need to end up in jail to rot for a long, long time! Justice is nigh!

DETECTIVE: We know that you were there the day your cousin was killed. We have eyewitness statements from your neighbours stating that you were seen at fourteen hundred hours.

SIMON: But I have an alibi for that day. I’m sure you are interested to hear it!

DETECTIVE: What then is your alibi for that day?
(Simon turns to his Lawyer who nods at him as if giving her permission)

SIMON: I did go around to my cousin's house that day, but I didn't go there to murder my cousin. I helped him clear out the attic. I was there from Ten in the morning until Three in the afternoon.

DETECTIVE: The Coroner stated that your cousin's death occurred about four o'clock in the afternoon. I am about to show Mr Ross item number 4; for the purpose of the tape it is a picture that had been taken around about four o'clock by a neighbour when she heard shouting. The photo shows Mr Ross' car being outside of his cousin's house at that time. I put it to you Mr Ross why was your car at your cousin's house around about that time.

SIMON: My lawyer has instructed me at this time to exercise my right to ‘no comment.’

INNER VOICE: Simon's Mum’s voice: All we want is justice Simon is that too much to ask for? Justice is nigh!

SOUND: a gunshot

LAWYER: I propose a break in the interview so that I can continue to speak to my client on my own.

DETECTIVE: Interview suspended at nineteen hundred hours. Interview will continue at ten hundred hours tomorrow.

INNER VOICE: In his sleep Simon cries out: leave me alone leave me alone I haven't done anything wrong.

The following day…

DETECTIVE: The interview begins on Day Two at ten hundred hours.
I am about to show Mr Ross an item of clothing discovered where his mum's body was found.

INNER VOICE: Simon's mum's voice: You will never be accepted by our family again you mean nothing to us! You are a traitor and need to be dealt with accordingly. Justice is nigh!

SIMON: (putting his head in his hands) Aargh! Leave me alone!!

DETECTIVE: (In a concerned voice at the sudden outburst)  Mr Ross are you alright?

LAWYER: Of course he isn't! What have you people been doing to him?

DETECTIVE: (switches of the tape recorder before turning back with a concerned look on his face) Don't blame us Mrs Andrews we have done nothing to him; he was fine this morning when we got him out of his cell.

SOUND: A GUN SHOT

SIMON: Get out of my head! Get out, get out, get out!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LAWYER: I suggest we take a break. It’s obvious my client isn't in the right frame of mind.

DETECTIVE: (calls to two officers outside the interview room) Take Mr Ross back to the cells.

SIMON: (as he is taken out of the interview room) I don't deserve this! I am not a killer!

DETECTIVE: (speaking to one of his colleges outside the interview room)
I think the pressure of this all has got to him. I think his conscience is troubling him.

SOUND: Police sirens (about 30 seconds)

LAWYER: (In the cells where Simon has bee taken to calm down.)
Simon are you alright now? (asking in a worried voice)

SIMON: (staring into space, a slight pause before he answers)
Why won't they leave me alone? Why won't they leave me alone?

LAWYER: (apprehensive voice) Who are these people you are talking about Simon?

SIMON: (screaming) Get away! Get away! None of you are safe!!

LAWYER: (backing away towards the cell door) I'm going to go now Simon.
You know how to get in contact with me if you need to discuss anything.

SIMON: Get away, flee for you are all in peril! Please listen to me otherwise you will al die just like my family did!

SOUND: Gun shots

(Scene switches to the court case)

JUDGE: Mr Simon Andrew Ross you are charged with at least twenty known members of your own family.

INNER VOICE: An unknown family member: justice is nigh!

JUDGE: the jury will adjourn so they can make a decision on the case.

A FAMILY MEMBER: (shouts out from the gallery) Make the right decision don't let him walk free! (The jury walks out the room)

(After a few hours the jury returns offering their verdict)

JUDGE: Mr Simon Ross I sentence you to life in jail.

A FAMILY MEMBER: Justice at last for Millie, Andrew, James, Ella, Millie, Edward, Reece, Alex, Ben, Isabella, Lilli, Thomas, Mandy, Samuel, David, Abigail, Tristan, Alec, Sophie and, Alice. Rest in Peace. You will always be remembered and, always missed.

INNER VOICE: Simon's mum's voice: ‘Justice at last! Simon will never be able to live with himself; poor, poor Simon Andrew Ross. He chose the wrong path and strayed from his true destiny.

Thirty three seconds later – A sound of screaming and sobbing

SIMON:  I’m so sorry… I’m so sorry… how could I have possible done all that!

(Stumbles out of his bed and walks over to his computer screen, hugging it and sobbing) I’m sorry my SIM City Family! I promise not to mix valium and vodka before bedtime!

Sobbing eventually dies away…

After all the changes I decided to stick with this script with a twist in the end meaning it's not what the listeners will have been listening to had gone on. 

Fifth mock up

This was the one where I looked at putting him behind the bars and them being in black and white instead of red and black. This makes it look more like a prison.

Last mock up for newspaper advertisement

This was the last mock up I did for the newspaper advertisement this gave me another idea of what to do as the stripes are supposed to represent prison bars, instead of it being black and white red and white. The red is supposed to represent the blood that has been shed by the man behind the bars who is the murderer.

4th mock up of newspaper advertisement

This was the fourth mock up of the newspaper I did, I liked this idea as with the person's face not being shown it gives some mystery to who it is and what will happen in the radio play.

Teacher Feedback

Following discussion on 20/11/13-can't go beyond low level 2: incomplete, text heavy, missing wide range of research, more media language in analysis-currently 8 or 9/20...

Third idea on photoshop advertisement in newspapers

This was the third attempt I took at photoshop when trying to come up with a advert to advertise my radio play in the newspapers.I took the idea of having the knife and the blood representing death and the blood that had been shed.

Second draft idea for newspapers

This was the second attempt at photoshop where I had an idea that I could have my character Simon holding a bloody knife, representing the killing he has already done and the killing that is still to take place.

First attempt at photoshop

This was one of my first mock ups for the radio play newspaper advertisement this was supposed to symbolise the potemt of death that would happen in this radio play. This was a basic outline of what sort of thing I was trying to get at. If it was completely finished than it would have had more information on and seem to be more eyectching.

A link to show how to put a photo onto photoshop

I found a Youtube clip when I first started to use Photoshop to learn how to put a photo onto a blank canvas.

Third draft of script

OUT TO GET ALL

TIME FOR JUSTICE

JUSTICE IS NIGH

SCENE: 1

       (POLICE STATION)

SOUND: Radio fading into the background

DETECTIVE:the interview begins at 13:00 hundred hours, Mr Simon Andrew Ross. you are charged with the murder of twenty family members. how do you plead?

Simon: I plead not guilty. (A wavering voice that doesn't convince the Detective)

DETECTIVE: I am about to show the accused item 1 a piece of clothing we found at the crime scene, where we found the bodies of his father and mother.One of the first scenes we attended to.

VOICE:The sound of Simon's mum cut through: You are guilty and that's all you need to know. Justice is nigh.

SIMON:(HIS FACE VISIBLY PALES) I DO NOT RECOGNIZE  THE    PIECES OF CLOTHING. I HAVE NEVER SEEN THEM BEFORE.


VOICE: Simon's dad's voice comes in Simon you have seen this before, remember and get the justice we deserve. you are a killer Simon. justice is nigh.

Lawyer: DETECTIVE I CALL FOR A BREAK IN THE INTERVIEW MY, CLIENT ISN'T LOOKING TOO WELL.

DETECTIVE: (speaks to the tape) A BREAK IN THE INTERVIEW AT 13:30 HOURS.


VOICE: Simon's Mum's voice: Simon tell the truth it's the only way. no one can live with that sort of guilt. justice is nigh.

SOUND: Door closes before a sound of a tape recorder sounds

DETECTIVE: The interview begins again at 15:00 hours. (A slight pause before continuing.) I am showing Mr Simon Ross item 2. For the use of the tape I am showing Mr Simon a knife that we found at the scene of the crime. the knife had been identified as the murder weapon with both your mum's and dad's blood on. How do you explain this? (before Simon can answer his dad's voice pops into his head again)


SOUND: Wind whistling

VOICE: SIMON'S DAD'S VOICE:SIMON YOU HAVE SEEN THIS BEFORE, REMEMBER AND GET THE JUSTICE WE DESERVE. you are nothing but a killer justice is nigh

DETECTIVE: Simon do you recognize this knife?

SIMON: I have only seen this particular knife when my mum has been cooking and using it in the kitchen.

DETECTIVE: (sighs heavily as not getting anywhere) WE FOUND YOUR FINGERPRINTS all over the kitchen. HOW DO YOU EXPLAIN THAT?

LAWYER: AT THIS TIME I HAVE ADVISED MY CLIENT TO HAVE HIS RIGHT TO NO COMMENT.


VOICE: SIMON'S DAD'S VOICE: SIMON DON'T LET OUR DEATH BE IN VAIN TELL THE TRUTH. YOU KNOW EXACTLY WHY YOUR FINGERPRINTS ARE AROUND THE KITCHEN. justice is nigh.

DETECTIVE: I AM ABOUT TO SHOW MR Ross item 3 that we have found at the second crime scene. For the purpose of the tape recorder I AM SHOWING MR ROSS A PIECE OF CLOTH THAT WE IDENTIFIED TO THE DISEASED UNCLE OF HIS.


SOUND: RUSTLING OF PAPER AS HE PULLS THE BAG FROM A PILE OF OTHER EVIDENCE THAT HAS BEEN COLLECTED.

DETECTIVE: THE ITEM IS A PIECE OF CLOTH THAT IS COVERED IN BLOOD. AFTER WE HAD SENT IT TO THE FORENSIC SCIENTISTS THEY IDENTIFIED IT TO BE FROM THE DEAD BODY WE FOUND IN THE GARDEN.IT HAD FINGERPRINTS OF MR SIMON ROSS ON.


VOICE: mum's VOICE: LET ME HAVE THE JUSTICE THAT we all DESERVE. justice is nigh.

SIMON: MY UNCLE'S DEAD. (SIMON'S VOICE WAVERS) i didn't know. why haven't i been told?


VOICE: SIMON'S UNCLE: DON'T LIE SIMON YOU DON'T DESERVE TO WALK AWAY FROM THIS. YOU KILLED US ALL AND YOU NEED TO GO TO JAIL TO ROT FOR A LONG TIME. justice is nigh.

DETECTIVE: WE KNOW YOU WERE THERE THE DAY YOUR UNCLE WAS KILLED. WE HAVE REPORTS FROM NEIGHBORS saying they saw you about 14:00 hours.

SIMON: I HAVE AN Alibi FOR THAT DAY IF YOU ARE INTERESTED IN HEARING IT.

DETECTIVE: what is your alibi for that day? (Simon turns to his Lawyer who nods at him as if giving her permission)

Simon: I did go around my uncle's house that day, but i didn't go there to murder my uncle. I helped him clear out the attic i was there from ten in the morning till three in the afternoon.

Detective: the Corrina said your uncle's death was around about four o'clock in the afternoon. I am about to show Mr Ross item number 4 a picture that had been taken around about four o'clock by a neighbor when she heard the shouting. the photo shows Mr Ross' car being outside of his uncle's house at that time. i put it to you Mr Ross why was your car at your uncle's house around about that time.

Simon: My lawyer has told me to at this time to play the no comment.

VOICE: simon's uncles voice: all we want is justice simon is that too much to ask for. justice is nigh.

SOUND: A gong being struck

lawyer: i propose a break in the interview so i can continue to speak to my client on my own.

detective: interview suspended at 1900 hours. interview will continue at 10:00 hours tomorrow.

VOICE: in his sleep Simon cries out: leave me alone leave me alone i haven't done anything wrong.

detective: The interview begins on day two at 10:00 hours. i am about to show Mr Ross an item of clothing found where his sister's body was found.

VOICE: Simon's sister's voice: you will never be accepted by our family again you mean nothing to us. You are a traitor and need to be dealt with accordingly. justice is nigh.

Simon: (putting his head in his hands)argh!leave me alone.

Detective: (in a concerned voice at the sudden outburst)Mr ross are you alright?

lawyer: of course he isn't what have you people been doing to him?

detective: (switches of the tape recorder before turning back with a concerned look on his face)Don't blame us Mrs Andrews we have done nothing to him, he was fine this morning and when we got him out of the cell.

SOUND: A GUN SHOT

Simon: get out of my head get out get out get out.

Lawyer: i suggest we take a break. it's obvious my client isn't in the right frame of mind.

detective: (calls to two officers outside) take Mr Ross back to the cells.

Simon: (as he is taken out of the interview room)i don't deserve this i am not a killer!

detective: (speaking to one of his colleges outside the interview room)i think the pressure of this all has got to him.i think his subconsciousness

SOUND: Police sirens (about 30 seconds)

lawyer: (in the cells where Simon has bee taken to, to calm down.) Simon are you alright now? (asking in a concerned voice)

Simon: (stares of into space a slight pause before he answers) why won't they leave me alone why won't they leave me alone?

Lawyer: (concerned voice) Who are these people you are talking about Simon?

Simon: (screams)get away get away none of you are safe!!

lawyer:(backing away towards the cell door) I'm going to go now. You know how to get in contact with me if you need to discuss anything.

Simon: get away your all in peril your all in peril leave now or you will all die like my family did.


SOUND: Gun shots

VOICE: an unknown family member: justice is nigh.


(Switches to the court case)

Judge: Mr Simon Ross i sentence you to life in jail.

A family member: justice at last for: Millie, Andrew, James, Ella, Millie, Edward, Reece, Alex, Ben, Isabella, Lilli, Thomas, Mandy, Samuel, David, Abigail, Tristan, Alec, Sophie and, Alice. rest in peace. you will always be remembered and, always missed.

VOICE:Justice at last. Simon will never be able to live with himself.Poor poor Simon Andrew Ross. he choose the wrong path and strayed from his true destiny.

The third draft of the script I realised that I needed to cut down on the time the play went on for this gave me the chance to be able to go through and delete the lines that I didn't need to have. It was over five minutes before I cut down and, the extract of the radio play had to be five minutes. 

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script draft 2

OUT TO GET ALL

TIME FOR JUSTICE

JUSTICE IS NIGH

SCENE: 1

       (POLICE STATION)

SOUND: Radio fading into the background

DETECTIVE:THE INTERVIEW BEGINS AT 13:00 HUNDRED HOURS, MR SIMON ANDREW ROSS. YOU ARE CHARGED WITH THE MURDER OF TWENTY FAMILY Members. How do you plead?

Simon: I plead not guilty. (A wavering voice that doesn't convince the Detective)

DETECTIVE: I am about to show the accused a piece of clothing we found at the crime scene, where we found the bodies of his father and mother.

VOICE: The sound of Simon's mum cut through. Simon stop it stop it stop it. Justice is nigh. You can't  change what is inevitable.

SIMON:(HIS FACE VISIBLY PALES) I DO NOT RECOGNIZE  THE    PIECES OF CLOTHING. I HAVE NEVER SEEN THEM BEFORE.

VOICE: Simon's dad's voice comes in Simon you have seen this before, remember and get the justice we deserve. You are a killer Simon. Justice is nigh.

Lawyer: DETECTIVE I CALL FOR A BREAK IN THE INTERVIEW MY, CLIENT ISN'T LOOKING TOO WELL.

DETECTIVE: (speaks to the tape) A BREAK IN THE INTERVIEW AT 13:30 HOURS.

VOICE: Simon's Mum's voice: Simon tell the truth it's the only way. No one can live with that sort of guilt all of there life. Justice is nigh.

SOUND: Door closes before a sound of a tape recorder sounds

DETECTIVE: The interview begins again at 15:00 hours. (A slight pause before continuing.) I am showing Mr Simon Ross item 2. For the use of the tape I am show      ing Mr Simon a knife that we found at the scene of the crime. We have identified this knife as the murder weapon it had your mum's and dad's blood on.

SOUND: Wind whistling

VOICE: SIMON'S DAD'S VOICE COMES IN SIMON YOU HAVE SEEN THIS BEFORE, REMEMBER AND GET THE JUSTICE WE DESERVE. You don't deserve to be part of this family anymore. Justice is nigh.

(Simons mums and dads house)

Simon: where's the money uncle Peter left me? It was supposed to be here on the mantle.

Simon's mum: that money was never left for you. We all know you conned your uncle into giving it to you.

simon: you just all wanted the money to yourself.

simon's dad: dont speak to you mother like that.

Simon: (In an angry voice) you will all regret this. mark my words you will all regret this.

           (police station)

DETECTIVE: Simon do you recognize this knife?

SIMON: I have only seen this particular knife when my mum has been cooking and using it in the kitchen.

DETECTIVE: (sighs heavily as not getting anywhere) WE FOUND YOUR FINGERPRINTS all over the kitchen. HOW DO YOU EXPLAIN THAT?

LAWYER: AT THIS TIME I HAVE ADVISED MY CLIENT TO HAVE HIS RIGHT TO NO COMMENT.

VOICE: SIMON'S DAD'S VOICE: SIMON DON'T LET OUR DEATH BE IN VAIN TELL THE TRUTH. YOU KNOW EXACTLY WHY YOUR FINGERPRINTS ARE AROUND THE KITCHEN. justice is nigh.

DETECTIVE: I AM ABOUT TO SHOW MR Ross item 3 that we have found at the second crime scene. For the purpose of the tape recorder I AM SHOWING MR ROSS A PIECE OF CLOTH THAT WE IDENTIFIED TO THE DISEASED UNCLE OF HIS.

SOUND: RUSTLING OF PAPER AS HE PULLS THE BAG FROM A PILE OF OTHER EVIDENCE THAT HAS BEEN COLLECTED.

DETECTIVE: THE ITEM IS A PIECE OF CLOTH THAT IS COVERED IN BLOOD. AFTER WE HAD SENT IT TO THE FORENSIC SCIENTISTS THEY IDENTIFIED IT TO BE FROM THE DEAD BODY WE FOUND IN THE GARDEN.IT HAD FINGERPRINTS OF MR SIMON ROSS ON. BUT WHERE ARE THE GLOVES YOU USED TO STRANGLE HIM FIRST BEFORE MUTILATING HIS BODY SIMON?

VOICE: SIMON'S UNCLE'S VOICE: LET ME HAVE THE JUSTICE THAT I DESERVE. justice is nigh.

SIMON: MY UNCLE'S DEAD. (SIMON'S VOICE WAVERS) i didn't know

VOICE: SIMON'S UNCLE: DON'T LIE SIMON YOU DON'T DESERVE TO WALK AWAY FROM THIS. YOU KILLED US ALL AND YOU NEED TO GO TO JAIL TO ROT FOR A LONG TIME. Justice is nigh.

DETECTIVE: WE KNOW YOU WERE THERE THE DAY YOUR UNCLE WAS KILLED. WE HAVE REPORTS FROM NEIGHBORS THEY HAD SEEN YOU AROUND ABOUT THE TIME THE CORRINOR GAVE US A TIME OF DEATH.

SIMON: I HAVE AN Alibi FOR THAT DAY IF YOU ARE INTERESTED IN HEARING IT.

DETECTIVE: GO AHEAD AND RUN YOUR ALLABY THROUGH ME IT HAS TO BE CONVINCING AS THE EVIDENCE THAT IS STACKED UP AGAINST YOU is over whelming.

simon: I did go around my uncle's house that day, but i didn't go there to murder my uncle. I was there helping him clear out his attic i was there from ten in the morning till three in the afternoon.

Detective: the Corrina said your uncle's death was around about four o'clock in the afternoon. I am about to show Mr Ross item number 4 a piture that had been taken around about four o'clock by a neighbour when she heard the shouting. the photo shows mr ross' car being outside of his uncle's house at that time. i put it to you mr ross why was your car at your uncle's house around about that time.

Simon: My lawyer has told me to at this time to play the no comment.

VOICE: Simon’s uncles’ voice: all we want is justice simon is that too much to ask for. Justice is nigh.

SOUND: A gong being struck

(Simons Uncles house)

Simon: I’m so sorry your dying uncle is there anyway I can help you to sort things out.

Simons uncle: YOU ARE A KIND BOY HERE'S A LIST OF THINGS AND I WILL REWARD YOU FOR EVERYTHING YOU HAVE DONE FOR ME THESE LAST FEW MONTHS.

SIMON: NONE OF US ARE READY TO SAY GOODBYE TO YOU YET.

SIMON'S UNCLE: I KNOW BUT MY TIME IS UP AND, IT’S YOUR TIME TO STEP FORWARD.

SOUND: Gunshot

(Police station)

lawyer: i propose a break in the interview so i can continue to speak to my client on my own.

detective: interview suspended at 1900 hours. interview will continue at 10:00 hours tomorrow.

VOICE: in his sleep simon cries out: leave me alone leave me alone i haven't done anything wrong.

dectective: The interview begins on day two at 10:00 hours. i am about to show mr ross an item of clothing found where his sister's body was found.

VOICE: Simon's sister's voice: you will never be accepted by our family again you mean nothing to us. You are a traitor and need to be dealt with accordingly. justice is nigh.

Simon: (putting his head in his hands)argh!!!!! leave me alone.

Detective: (in a concerned voice at the sudden outburst)Mr ross are you alright?

lawyer: of course he isn't what have you people been doing to him?

detective: (switches of the tape recorder) we haven't done anything to him if....

SOUND: A GUN SHOT

simon: get out of my head get out get out get out.

Lawyer: i suggest we take a break. it's obvious my client isn't in the right frame of mind.

detective: (calls to two officers outside) take Mr Ross back to the cells.

simon: (as he is taken out of the interview room)i don't deserve this i didn't do anything wrong!!!

dtective: (speaking to one of his colleges outside the interview room)i think the pressure of this all has got to him.i think his subconsciousness

SOUND: Police sirens (about 30 seconds0

lawyer: (in the cells where simon has bee taken to, to calm down.) simon are you alright now? (asking in a concerned voice)

simon: (stares of into space a slight pause before he answers) why won't they leave me alone why won't they leave me alone?

Lawyer: (concerned voice) Who are these people you are talking about simon?

Simon: (screams)get away get away!!

lawyer:(backing away towards the cell door) I'm going to go now. You know how to get in contact with me if you need to discuss anything.

Simon: get away your all in peril your all in peril leave now or you will all die like my family did.

SOUND: Gun shots

VOICE: an unknown family member: justice is nigh.

(Switches to the court case)

Judge: Mr Simon Ross i sentence you to life in jail.

A family member: justice at last for: mIllie, Andrew, James, Ella, Millie, edward, Reece, Alex, Ben, Isabella, Lili, Thomas, Mandy, Samuel, david, abbigail, trista, alec, sophie and, alice. rest in peace you will always be remembered and, always missed.

VOICE: a family member:Justice is nigh at last. Simon will never be able to live with himself. In the end he will go mentally deranged and die in jail alone with no family or friends.

I did a second draft of the script as I wasn't happy with certain aspects of the script, this also gave me the chance to give characters more lines or develop their lines further.